勸退申訴
“Show Cause”是悉尼大學要求學術進展不理想的學生提交的一種解釋與自救報告,如果不在規定時間內提交,或者內容說服力不足,最嚴重可能被“exclusion”(退學)。
Show Cause寫作結構模板:
表明你知曉當前學術狀態(如:Academic Progress Stage 2/3)
簡要說明你寫這封信是為了繼續完成學業
示例:
I am writing this statement in response to the Show Cause notice I received regarding my academic progress. I understand the seriousness of the matter and wish to explain the circumstances affecting my performance, as well as my plans to improve.
可以是健康問題、家庭變故、適應困難、心理問題等
盡量附上證據,如醫生證明、心理咨詢記錄等
示例:
During the semester, I experienced significant mental health challenges, which severely impacted my concentration and study habits. I have since sought professional help and have attached a medical certificate for reference.
包括參加學習小組、學術輔導、時間管理改進等具體措施
展現你有認真對待并決心提升
示例:
To address these issues, I have already begun weekly sessions with the Learning Centre and will continue to meet regularly with an academic advisor. I have also enrolled in workshops on time management and academic writing.
展現積極態度和對學位的重視
示例:
I am committed to improving my academic performance and completing my degree at the University of Sydney. I respectfully ask for the opportunity to continue my studies.
小貼士
寫作語氣要誠懇、理性、積極
嚴禁推卸責任,重在展現反思和改進
建議請海馬課堂的資深申訴專家和外籍導師協助潤色提升說服力
留學生的求學路不易,但Show Cause不是終點,而是爭取重回正軌的機會。把握住這次機會,調整節奏,你依然可以順利完成學業!